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Drowning

And it feels as if I'm being pulled deep down underwater and I'm drowning and there is no one to save me... They bounded me by weights and threw away the key ?  I screamed and scremed for someone to set me free...One, two, three I kept counting till I hit rock bottom and was down on one knee... Life told me to give up and I started to agree while I sat there helpless at the bottom of the deep black sea ?

I'm drowning I can't breath and I'm running out of time ? I realize that I should have lived my life more up to its prime I lived as if i knew when i was gonna die which should be a crime cause I underestimated on how fast life can be taken away and how when life gave me mountains ? to climb I took the easy way out at the drop of a dime as you see I should've chosen different as you read ? this rhyme.

I was drowning and he pulled me up and I started to see light ? and I'm so grateful he did because I had gave up on the fight and like always he came and made things right.

So now I was living life to its fullest and taking risk and making decisions and I thought I was a real G.

Then I stopped and remembered who went down and saved me. So then I thought O.

This is not where he wanted me to go he said to go with the flow but you can't just think bout the things you do you gotta know. If life were a class I'd at least be passing with a D.

But if life were a ticket I'd have to pay a big fee ?

Who is this man that saved me and gave me a second chance at life. I think back to that day and all that I remember is 2 words that were whispered in my ear... Jesus Christ ?....

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Nathan Antoine

Nice poem! I wrote something similar called "Drowning Transformed Me". Different words but definitely similar paths within them.

Like a bat in the night
I fly
Wondering why
How could I have fallen from that tree?
Looking for answers that can’t be seen
Listening but hearing nothing
Smelling the sweet smell of live roses
While dead roses cry
I'm now in rivers that I can’t swim in
Gasping for air
Unsure where I was going
Until floating up from a river of tears
I recognize each drop as old and new fears 
And I am a butterfly

 

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Jade Mitchell

Thank you and i like your poem as well and they do run along the same line with the meaning but different words.

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