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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn,

Though short in lines, your poem is strong enough to move the minds and to break all the silences, love, applause, vote, I love the below lines

You reached for me and fell for me

As the smoke cleared you disappeared

Into the solitary shadows

I love the walls that shut me in

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Williamsji!! These words you wrote made my night:

~~Though short in lines, your poem is strong enough to move the minds and to break all the silences

Val ♥

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sparrowsong

You always do it me.

Love ya

Thank You for all you do

sparrowsong

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you so very much Sparrowsong!! I appreciate you taking the time to read this poem and leave me a comment!! :)

With Love,

Val ♥

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Valerie Lynn

What does nightstand mean? I'm confused haha ;)

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LiamoAlive

You visited by demon 

Or Angel

Who left you ?

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