Ego
An impenetrable darkness, a denseness that allows no breaches to it's defences, weaves an illusion of it's own pretences.
Shades of grey, fleeting light awakens to fall away, an arsenal of delusions keeps the light at bay.
Glorified when victorious, diminished with all failures, the darkness prevails regardless.
Release the illusions of tomorrow, relinquish delusions blindly followed, awaken to the light that removes all sorrow.
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Welcome to Cosmofunnel !
Wonderful structure and powerful feeling to your first submission, accompanied by a gorgeous picture. Love it.
Best wishes to you.
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Thank you for the positive feedback. I'm very new to this so have no idea if what I write is worthy of reading. All and any feedback is much welcomed :)
Just be natural writing down what your heart tells you to ! Freedom of expression is so valuable and no one should hold back ! Artistic integrity, to yourself, is key to producing works that are read.
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Thank you :)
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emotive piece. Construct and cadence treacle sweet. nice piece
Thank you for the positive comment it's much appreciated :)