THE ELEPHANT WHO LOST HER TRUMPET!

Nelly was an elephant who liked to sing a song
One day she blew her trumpet, but the tune it came out wrong!
The animals in the jungle joked “your trunk’s packed up and left!”
But she did not find it funny; poor old Nelly felt bereft!!
She blew all day; she blew all night; she blew so hard with all her might!
“Oh my gosh! What will I do?” Poor Nelly was feeling very blue!
She wiped a tear and trundled off, to a place where she could hide
She’d not just lost her trumpet but more importantly her pride!
As she peered into the river, saw her reflection down below
She questioned what to do? Perhaps the croc would know!!
Old croc lazed in the shallows; he liked to have a sleep
Waiting for a morsel; one eye open so he could peep!
“Can you help me ...” said poor Nelly, as she approached the grumpy croc
“...... I’m getting teased ... my trumpets gone!! The animals they all mock!”
“Have you been to see the doctor? Mr Chimp ... he’s rather clever!”
“I haven’t said the elephant, not needed to .... not ever!”
So she went to see the doctor who listened to her plight
“I think I know what’s wrong with you; you’re going to be alright!”
“You’ve got a common problem, it’s a frog stuck in your throat!
The river carries many things, you must watch out for what’s afloat!”
"So what’s the answer doc?" ....  but the doc just gave a grin
He kicked old Nelly from behind, and the frog flew in the bin!!
Nelly smiled the biggest grin; and sucked in a gust of air
Let out a great big trumpet!!! ... now all you jungle animals be aware!!
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Haha love this Rachel, i could read this to my daughters and they would love it, beautifully written X:)
Thanks Jason, glad you liked, might try it on my daughter, but there again she is far too honest for my liking lol!!! Â Can't wait to see your addition to the children's verse entries. Â I loved Dirty Red Riding Hood, just take out the dirty and make it clean ha ha! :)x
Wow I just added this to my favorites! I loved it! A very cute story.
Thanks Felicia, glad you liked, appreciate your kind comments :)
Cute and very clever,
Laz
Cheers Laz, thanks for reading :)
hi Rachel loved this hadn't even seen this as a topic can't be on as much as I used to lol congrats its brill x
Ha ha, thanks Susan, can't wait for your addition to the Children's verse, just keep it clean lol!! :)
Gold as usual Rachel...big 5 star nom from me! Â When I read your work I sense a similar style to myself :)
Cheers Carey, your reading and comments are much appreciated! Â Love your stuff :)
Fantastic poem with very good imaginationÂ
I love it very much !
Thanks Rachel
Sophy Chen
Thanks for reading Sophy, so glad you enjoyed :)
great poem rachel ,i let my daughter read and she loved it ,so good storyteller you are in a few topics  well done !!  tina x
Thanks Tina, your kind words are much appreciated!! Â Glad your daughter enjoyed, that is a great compliment :)
Awesome loved it!
Cheers Josh, glad you liked it :)