Poem -
Ember Skye
The light is my Weakness
The darkness is my Strength
The eyes are seen in the day
The night seems to wash them away
The strength I had before is fading
The hope I had is losing grip
The fear I have is threatening to rip
Piece by Piece my soul is breaking
Day by Day my heart is aching
The mind I have is set on FIRE
Burning pieces that yearn desires
Desires that cannot be reached
Desires that cannot be claimed
Soon with nothing will come the end
Soon the fire will burn to the core
Leaving nothing from the days before
Just Embers left to float up high
Just Embers left up in the Skye
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Comments
Hey Emberskye!!!.....I haven't read you before (my loss)............I don't know if Ember Skye is your real name...........regardless......... this is a VERY creative and compelling piece you've delivered here..........I love the metaphysical aspect and implications of this.............but I also thought the formatting was creative...........the way you let yourself keep some freedom to the flow by not adhering so tightly to a perfect rhyme scheme..........that really added to the heartbeat and ambiance of the whole...........well conceived and beautifully delivered.... 5*s Pin .......well done.............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
thankyouuuu! I normally dont follow a format i just write whatever i feel sometimes it rhymes and sometimes its completely different but im glad u love it. Ember skye isnt my real name but with what i feel and been through, i feel more connected with the name than my real name and i do plan on changing my name to ember !!! :)