Poem -
Embossed
the sun shines
on a clear day
yet a hole
that won't go away
an empty feeling
I am lost
with you gone
yet embossed
is your name
in my heart
every night
in my thoughts
now for ever
I am caught
in what could have been
if you were here
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Comments
Hi Miss Bahkt, I really liked this, it comes across very honestly............the loneliness and longing for, comes through in the tone of it.............strong write..............tony xx
thank you Tony
Nice, the poem is an unique example of trust, love and extreme faith, good write..you are welcome...cute..with love..xx Ravindra Kumar xx
thank you Ravindra for taking the time to read my poem and of course your nice compliment.
Bahar