empty equation

Warships crimson,
elastic order,
Creaking boards,
chaotic disorder,
starboard fractures,
tortured violation,
displayed corruption ,
empty equation,
disturbing values,
fragments of sand,
twisted isolation,
forcing command,
creeping hands,
of forging desire,
one word,
his holly empire,
an illusion,
all suppressed,
broken heart,
Open chest,
silent cries,
broken dreams,
tears over flowing,
Running stream's,
flowers rotten,
corps walks new,
an instant release,
he's now done with you.

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Comments
Dear nardine sanderson,
" empty equation " is good in its theme, but you have to decorate it bit more, I know you can do that easily, Conveying your emotion is vital . Good write. Thanks for sharing.
Poetry is what poetry is scribbled, It is be communicated. Good luck.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you W.M, was a hard one for me to finalize.
Powerful imagery! I like the way it flows too. Well done.
Thank you very much Gina xo