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A Lonely Journey

Hey Marsipona,Ā 
That was short, but really powerful. So much taken be taken from that. It's beautifully, mysteriously, sorrowful.Ā 

Great work.Ā 

Matthew.Ā 

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Marsipona

Thank you!
I think that sometimes, less words say much more.

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Tony Taylor

Succinctly compelling...... and upon consideration....... Powerfully moving......Poetically clever....... well conceived & perfectly delivered!!........smokin' grooves MARSIPONA!!........Bravo!! ????
PINNED!!.... well done!!........T xo ?āœ“ā¤?

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Marsipona

Thank you so much!!!
Your comment could be a poem on its own!

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