Poem -
Entity.......................................................................................Dedicated to Makell
Mystery girl holding spirit in thine hand,
Tip toeing through the enchanted land.
Take me with you to the forest of dreams!
Your imagination captured me it seems!
I also want to see dainty fairies dance,
The white unicorns parade and prance!
How did you escape your mothers care?
My little tip toeing mystery girl; so fair!
Spirit you carry with you; brightly glows!
Will answer all questions, it already knows.
People forgotten; from previous places,
You'll remember next time you see their faces!
In your spiritual home; where family resides,
Whispers the entity you carry; whom guides!
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Comments
Awww I love your little mystery girl so mystique and magical Abfab Jim my lovely lad 💕🌹💕
thank you my abfab friend!
wonderful poemÂ
thank you Greg!
Great write Jim 🤗
I'll run with that compliment Marion! thank YOU!
Hi Jim, what got me in this write (besides your signature structure!), is your choice to describe the little girls dream from a 3rd person perspective. I especially enjoyed;
It really captivates the innocent excitement of a little girl.
Awesome poetry Jim, one of my favourite from you.
I hope you are feeling better my friend!
thank you Max! so glad you got some enjoyment from this one! hope you are finding joy and hope you never completely depart this stage! your friend always!...........................................................................................Jim
thank you Hj!
Just lovely.
Very cool.Â
thank you Liliana!
Jim your well written poem shines brightly and happily and ethereally so.
And a wee bit of mystery added for good measure on this journey travelled, a literal spiritual journey, we all eventually venture on, if one takes the time to read between its lines.
Loved reading this one sir and your well chosen captivating image adds to your well chosen captivating words.
Thanks Jim for sharing, remain poetry blessed and enjoy life.
love your feed back Shaun ! thank you!
thank you Baker Street!
thank you BelleBelle!