ENTITY: HARBINGER OF SLAUGHTER
My eyes open
My heart closed
And my ears peeled
I hear Satan's roar!
Welcome to the inner workings of my mind:
A contortion dark and foul
Sullied by evil;
My only sustenance!
Tis a whirling hurricane
Which consumes sanity
And leaves the aftermath
of
Violence
so
I eat it
and
Become the cannibal;
A cursed predator
Who enjoys
Writhing, coiling, oozing
Abominations committed
In my guise:
A Chthonian shroud
Dripping black sorcery,
Consummated by the sibyl's oracle
Wearing the souls of men
As my sacred phylactery!
I am unable to disguise me...
Blood and madness is always red!
I use the mask to trick,
To obscure my possession
And my fangs
And my deeds!
I will be with you
On Allhallows Eve
Little ones
For you are my treats!
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Comments
Good write..
Thank you Morris!
great write again Valerie congrats x
Thanks again Susan! val
Good write Val :)
Thanks Jason! Love writing scary stuff! val
Hi Val I'm off the smokes must be coming up to 6 months not my 1st time trying but this is the longest I've lasted hopefully I've cracked it a great write x
Susan I was referencing my other poem (Chocolate Cigarette) and commented in this one but anyway...good for you because its not easy. I enjoyed smoking but my doctor told me to
STOP...so, I haven't had a cigarette for 17 years. val
you are.......a great amazing poet keep it up.a role model to me as I am 13
Hi Mahlatse! Thank you so much... I have been writing since I was about 13. Writing is my release, my escape and my passion. I am enjoying the journey... I am sure that you will too! val
Hi Val,
I'm very excited about halloween this year because of your well written poem, thanks!
I can't wait to see more of your work,
Loves,
Tuyet M.
Hi Tuyet! Thanks for your comments! I like a little horror now and then.
I'll make a visit to your collection of work.
val
Hey VALERIE!! NOW you're talkin' girlfriend...........you do a LOT of romantic writes.........had to go back 4 pages to find this.........so glad I did..........I swear.........you have an amazing gift...........eloquently subtle vocabulary disguising just how truly intelligent you are..........these dark writes of yours deserve to be seen.............again, your imagery here is devastatingly compelling..........and you lose yourself in your delivery ~ making your formatting unique..........I keep hearing you use the word prose with these writes.........it's not...........it's freestyle poetry...........my favorite form........because the possibilities are endless........and you my friend..........shine......when you write like this.........smokin' grooves girlfriend........smokin' grooves..............much Love and respect ...........T xo
Tony! You missed THE MUSES HEAD…a page or two back! I have several unfinished writes on madness and vamps and murder. I'll will revisit them and finish them for you! I started writing dark writes after taking a class on Edgar Allen Poe at Chicago Circle.
Thanks for the correction…I was calling it prose because there is no rhythmic cadence or formal structure in the write. Yes, it's free style…and I can go with my mind's flow.
val xox