ESCAPE TO PARADISE
I awoke in a world full of sadness...
Where hatred walks...
Where the living wake up dead...
Where happiness is seeked and never found...
Where people swim until they drown...
Where a moving locomotive is a ticket out...
Where a gun holds deaths key...
Where sex is the only thing that reminds you of your senses...
Where life has the cost of below living...
Where the dirt is the want of our being...
The rush to be made dust...
The voice of paradise is calling and where living is the desire...
Where dirt is for beauty and nutrients to our body...
Where life is forever and where death doesn't reach...
Where love is sacred...
Escape to Paradise...
The key is waiting...
No one is reaching...
The key to death...
Plenty for the taking...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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I wish I could applaud you because that is so great and touching. Bravo
Hi Sparrowsong, the world is chaotic and escape to paradise seems to be the only solution out of the mess our world has turned to. But reaching for the key to paradise (death) we all dread.
Lovely write
Lots of love.....Rose
Hi Sparrowsong Wow! this poem really got to me
and i`m not sure if i am right but my interpretation is
i felt the chaos in life the thoughts of maybe throwing
oneself under a train putting a gun to your head to be out of the madness
and destruction in this world to be in paradise that made me think of heaven
where all is less chaotic just peaceful where mother nature is respected
if i interpreted wrong Sparrowsong I still think its an excellent thought provoking poem
Great write Hugs Debs
Hello Izzy...
Thank you for such a compliment as this...
Thank you very much for your comment!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Soul Sis...
There's a key that leads to Paradise...
It's there for the taking...
It remains in place...
I choose not to live in darkness...
I choose not to be sucked in to the doom and gloom...
We have a choice...
I have chosen the key of life...
The key that will lead to Paradise...
There's many keys, but many won't choose the key to Paradise...
Thank you for your comment...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Sweet Rose...
The key to death is permanent...
If it was the only key we would never be promised...
Life Everlasting...
The key to death will never lead to life...
The death key many will choose because we all have a choice...
Thank you for your kind comment...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Sis Debs...
You have such vision when you are touched by words...
You help me see things in such a different way...
Thank you for your comment my friend...
Thank you for being there!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Sis Cherie...
Choices are very important in life...
They can lead to life or destruction...
There are hidden keys...
The decision to make is...
Which key do we choose?
Thank you for the comment...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi Sweet Sparrowsong,
Paradise Lost. This beautiful earth molested, stripped, now laying barren, thanks to humanities greed, overrun with madmen, killing, maiming, precious lives ended. Yet beginning their stays in Paradise, my response to your beautiful poem is that is where these gentle souls will arrive.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hello Larry...
If we want beauty back it starts with each of us right?
Every soul will have a home...
I wonder if special souls have a special place?
Thank you for your comment and support!
Hugs, Peace and Love
sparrowsong