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Essence

Shout out: My debut poetry book - Tangles + Knots is available on Amazon :)

Essence

               The essence of my being
The embodiment that I am
       The sensations I am feeling
             The impressions I am leaving
Are nothing without knowing who I am 

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Being Me

Congratulations on your book!  As regards to this poem, I think it is important to know WHO  we really are. There are some people, I'm sure of it, who don't. Fab little poem x

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Tina! Cherie has read.
It definitely was a more philosophical write today. Thanks for reading. Px💜

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Beautiful way to make a critical question ! Best of luck on your endeavor!....Jim

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Tony Taylor

Hi PRATIBHA!!
One cannot leave an enduring mark on this reality without knowing who they truly are......A fine piece of philosophically sound, poetic, advice!!......ALL STARS!!.....Bravo dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you very much Tony. It's short but I'm glad it's on point from the comments. Yes I love philosophical. Thanks for reading 😁 Px💜

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Marion

Another wonderful masterpiece Pratibha..you are a beautiful soul...hugs 💕

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Pratibha Savani

Aaaww thank you Marion for your comment 😘 I have been pleasantly surprised this short piece is being received rather well. I'm enjoying short writes. Px 💜

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The fish of the sea

This is so smashing. I cant even describe it. Love the listing structure, reminds me of the style I like to write. 

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you kindly Max! Appreciate the feedback and how much people like this one has been a surprise for me. When I write in my sketchbook I actually dont write all left justified. It can start anywhere indented in and thats how I wanted to present it 😁
Px💜

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you kindly Lorris 😁 thanks for reading it. Px💜

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Sarfraz Ahmed

Totally love this,  simply put together but extremely powerful. An amazing affirmation. Well done! 

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Sarf! It's been fun doing short philosophical writes. Glad you liked it too. Px💜

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Terry Reeves

Hi P,
Really good, enjoyed reading.
Terry.
x
Pinned!
 

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Pratibha Savani

Aaahhh Terry!!! Thank you for the pin! So honoured and surprised that people have liked this phrase!! 😁 Px💜

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Shaun Cronick

Pratibha I enjoyed your poem very much, very spiritual, uplifting and inspiring.
Powerfully presented woven with sentiment.
Pinned for a future reread and five deserving stars.
Thanks for sharing and I wish you well.

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Shaun. Thank you for taking the time and going back to a poem. So good to know you liked it so much worthy of a pin and for the lovely comments. It is exactly what it suppose to be uplifting and motivational 😁. Px

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