Poem -

Etna

author
Neville

She was once, so very, very hot
and she knew it 
the boys then, called her Etna ..
and for a while
she would let them all lavat her
But then of course
she also knew, she could make
each one of them
erupt …. just like old Vesuvius ..

 

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Affection Attraction Beauty
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
Topic: 
Legend
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Marion

Glad I caught this...brought a smile to.my face. Possibly your oh so subtle phrasing and lighthearted honesty lol...clever write 😊 x

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Neville

What do ya mean possibly? Cheers M, glad you caught it too 😊 x

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