Poem -
Euphoria
I see now! I'm going to be the tail of the kite!
In many different ways, I would begin to take flight!
In these life highs; reaching many levels of height!
To leave the world behind briefly; only seemed right.
On two wheels with speed; I would begin to levitate!
When soaring over water; my kite would inflate!
As I pondered my sacred day with glory of,
Each flying case; reaching levels in euphoria!
My spiritual experiences; I cherished!
Then sadly; my physical ability perished.
Now those Spiritual experiences are wrought,
By reading scriptures, of what the Holy Ghost has taught!
The parasail and motorcycle brought days of joy!
But the Spiritual; no longer achieved by a toy.
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Beautiful writing Jim, I felt the spiritual growth in this clever write. The end realisation that brings a euphoric sensation of ascension. That is what I felt from reading this
Lovely
Gwen xΒ Β
thank you Gwen so much! I am pleased you liked it and responded! I think you will like my next one I will post on the 23rd of this month. Hope you are doing well!
I look forward to the 23rd my friend and yes I am alright. I hope you are well, and you are most welcome. It is a lovely poem
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thank you bunches brother Greg!
Great write as always Jim...especially love the last line x
thank you bunches Marion; my friend!
Nice read Jim⦠JP
many thanks JP!
As always Jim..such a joy to read..I have missed the wonderful sense of well-being your words bring with them..having recently moved house, and been without internet for many weeks..I am now able to be back in the βworldβ once more and have a lot of reading to catch up on..great piece as always! Lodigiana x
GREATΒ to see you back! you've been missed! thank you so much!.
thanks bunches Liliana!
Nowt short of exhilarating sir Jim .. & don't ya just love that opening line folks............. NΒ
lol! Neville ! thank you for pointing out my attempt to get attention!
Yeah, the Spiritual experience can't have via physical means. Excellent piece! Regards, Yiyan
PS Seems you've restricted messages?
thank you bunches Yiyan!
Good news, Jim. My translation of this good work has now been published:
Cheers, Yiyan
cool stuff Yiyan! I am excited and thankful!
Wow Jim, such an interesting poem, and it has received such a calling on Cosmos. I think I like the idea and symbolism of a kite, being free to fly, but also displaying ones own opinions and ideas. Inspiring and creative Jim, I look up to you~
Jim a life in a poem and a poem of life and I hear your inner voice loud and clear in your respected message and your end-line is something to behold and says it all.
It is good to know you're out there and the principles and ceaseless good will you stand for and adhere to.
I wish you well my friend and Merry Christmas to your good selfΒ and for sharing that 'feel good' sensation.
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thank you Shaun!