Poem -
Euphoric Dance
Mistress is much too eager!
Beware when something amiss.
After wrenched and beleaguered,
She leans in to offer her kiss.
As you fall; it's into her arms,
And suffocating embrace.
Amid mind altering alarms!
Rescue beings; not a trace.
Her fingers opening the veil,
Peering in; angels do beckon.
Pointing the way to hell,
Wanting action this second!
Beginning to relinquish your will,
Resisting the pull of deception.
Shivering in a stabbing chill,
You seek eternal perception.
A gasp! your return is instant,
Death hath rescinded her hold.
Pain rushes back to supplant,
The euphoric dance with the bold!
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Trying to describe in words an experience with a heart attack.
Hello Jim...
That's quite an experience indeed!!
Glad you're still here to tell about it...
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thank You for your support! now you know why it means so much to make new friends wonderful like you! ....................Jim
That was good, really good, maybe even too good! You are so gifted with your words. Reading your amazingly well written poetry will definitely leave a lasting impression. I am beyond impressed and you even taught me atleast two new words I didn't know before! Super cool!
Thank again Ashley! I learn a lot on this site as well.............Jim
I think this is a brilliant poem Jim, I love the way you've used the warm almost erotic touch of a woman to portray danger and potential death. Amazing write ...PS...did you have an NDE during this experience? Have you ever had an NDE...or out of body experience? x
I had an out of body vision, while reading the Book of Mormon in one of our Temples waiting on my wife. We volunteered their for about two years. and I tried to put it in words in my poem "Glory Unfolded" thank you for the kind words! all the best Marion!
As your other poems, totally intriguing.
Well done Jim on what you have kindly offered up here.
An absolute engaging theme, the warm glow of the tunnel of light kind.
And to have returned speaks volumes to this reader.
One path/journey we all venture on after a certain door closes.
Superb thyme scheme and darned tricky to pull off and keep things all coherent and not waffle and use filler forced rhyme either.
Jim you can probably by now see a pattern taking shape, for yes, I'm working backwards on your first posts.
Caught up on all your recent ones and this way I don't miss any.
Take care my friend and all good things to you and your family and Jim thank you for sharing your unique experience and you're still here and that's what counts for those around you.