Poem -
Evolution of Time
Circle of Life
It is said..........
That life is evolution
Of many thousands of years
We exist in this reality
Because of what we inherited
The genes
The chromosome
The double helix
All making us up
From the falling minerals
Of stars and dust
Thousands of years old
That made the earth
A circle that keeps evolving
In time......
As we pass by the years
And so..... Another spieces may evolve
After US....
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I Love It PRATIBHA!!....but I'll bet you already knew that (smiles).....given my penchant for this very kind of subject matter!!.......I REALLY like the way you formatted this too....it helps the reader with the flow of it......and if I wasn't short on time today I would go into much greater detail about the whole of it!!.......but please, suffice it to say........ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Hi Tony. Thanks for the lovely comments. I'm so glad the formatting worked out well. I've done this style a few times in my other posts and its kinda become my thing now lol. It is one of those subjects you can talk alot about, very pleased you found it a delight to read. Always value your perspective on my writes. Until my next one comes your way!! See you again real soon :).....Pxx 💜💜💜
Pratibha you had me on the word evolution let alone the word time.
And your more than well written message poem of substance is of that style so unique to you and that style I love to read and enjoy so much.
And I get it and love the way your pressing warning ending just hangs there, when you say,
As we pass by the years
And so..... Another spieces may evolve
After US....
Time will tell and always does and has all the time in the world to do so.
Superb as always Pratibha and full honours deservedly and respectfully bestowed my friend.❤️
Hi Shaun. Thank you so much. Yes this layout has now become my thing! Lol. I'm so pleased you found the ending poignant. Sometimes as a writer I write something but cannot know the impact it can make to others...if it does...until they say so.... Thank you for reading. Really value your input on my writes. Have a great day....nearly caught up on your poems...few more to go...Px
I really enjoyed this piece Pratibha, great writing. I also enjoy watching documentaries on similar subjects.
- Syd xo
Hi Syd. Thanks for taking time to read. Me too love nature and evolution documentaries too. Pxxx
Pratibha, this is beautiful x a momentary capture, of evolution and time, you do this so well x We want more!!!!!
Hi Sarf. I really like this one. Thanks for reading and the lovely comment mate! 💜💜💜
Wow p I almost missed this. So glad I thought to peek at your page :)
I love everything about this piece dear friend. Your words and indeed imagery through format really compels the reader into your subject matter here. The circle which symbolises infinity because it never ends, is regarded in the cycle of the universe. So instantly I am salivating on your wonderful writing and crystal clear thinking here. Beautiful and a timeless treasure ❤️ x PINNED x
Wow Gwen apologies in the lateness to reply back. I love the way you give feedback. Its truly encouraging and uplifting and love reading them. Thank you my friend for this beautiful feedback and amazing pin. The infinity sign is my favourite symbol of all time. And I am so pleased that my words came out clear in the message I wrote and you could whole heartedly relate to what I was saying. Much love Pxxx🙏🏽
All good my friend. Life can keep us on our toes, and Cosmo can get rather busy ;)
This was a wonderful piece you shared 💗x
Thank you Gwen so much! 😘💕💕💕
My kind of stuff PS. Great write!
JP
Thank you John! Me too. Thanks for reading x
When thoughts collide and the time is taken to analyse ourselves, where we are and life itself you end up with a kaleidoscopic manifestation of intellectual stimuli versus the deep rooted emotion coming from considering all in more detail. Neat write. Thanks for sharing. Wishing you well.
Hi Richard. Wow thank you for looking back at this older write. So lovely to know you enjoyed this poem. Really appreciate you taking the time to read it. I do like writing about nature and science. Px
Pratibha, my bad, for read this a while back and forgot to add the five star honours as well.
Clearly that reflects the power of your captivating writing in what is generously offered up.
And have to ask did you want to make your poem more visual, by being more circular, perhaps even an infinity symbol look about it.
But, had to make do with the keyboard tools on hand and it wasn't possible.
In other words a concrete poem look to it.
Dear Lord I'm beating around the bush here.
Anyway, good and great see you back and please keep writing my friend :)
Shaun xx
mmmm interesting thought about the inifinity symbol....it is my favourite sign.....i guess it could work but need to lay it out a little differently.....glad you liked it though....gosh its been 3 years since i posted it!!!