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dedicated to........... our friends Rebecca and George
Mosquitos destroy the blood!
Lion will only nibble,
Leak; overflows with flood!
Tsunami will only dribble.
Idle words; descend to the ground,
Passion will rise to the eyes!
Charity; a deafening sound!
Example; will fill the skies!
Stars burn out in a cosmic day,
Glory; extinguishes the night!
Angels dance on a beaming ray!
Messengers; exhorting the right!
Wind will lift the gliding dove,
Spirit brings; uplifting love!
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Hi Jim...another fine example of very well written poetry x
thank you Marion!
A fine example of a Christian writerΒ
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Thank you Charles! trying to be more !
awsomeΒ poem
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thank you Greg!
Nice verse Jim ππΌ
thank you JP!
Very nice
much thanks Greg T!
Very well executed my friend .. the unity of opposites works well here :) Neville
Thank you bunches Neville!
A very beautiful spiritual poem . β€οΈ
thank you so much Carol Anne!
This, Jim, is fabulous. I love sonnets! And yours here is just wonderful. I loved every word x
so glad you read and likedΒ this one Tina! my attempt at the stile of scripture.
You did a great job!
Dedications all round.Β
Love to all.Β
Safe and sound.Β
thank you so much Liliana! hope you have a very merry Christmas!
Exquisite sonnet Jim wow! I love those last lines. Stunning xΒ
wow! thank you bunches Gwen!
Jim, just browsing in your poetry neighbourhood and saw the wood carving image then read your poem.
And glad I stopped by.
Wonderful writing and everything smoothly flows and your heartfelt message resonates with this reader.
Thank you Jim and poetry kudosΒ to you for writing and sharing.
much thanks for your wonderful caring ways and words!
thank you Lisa!
thank you for all your support K.G.!