Poem -
Extinguished
Around and around and around
we go again....
Why can you not be happy ?
Always fightingÂ
Always roaringÂ
Always making me cryÂ
Curse you damn it
Why do I still stay?
You are addictive in your bright momentsÂ
until morning comes again
magic wears away leaving
nothing but a dull reality.
I look in the mirrorÂ
I dont see anyone i recognize.
Who is this weary looking scraggler?Â
Bruised and beaten.
You leave me,
and expect me to be here when you return?
I can't take it anymore.
I can't.
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Comments
Really clear and simple,
I can see the pain and emotions
Keep writing!
Welcome to Cosmofunnel!
awesome poem! love how you use simple words but they have such a deep emotional point!! loved it
Thank you so much
Hello Crystal...
Welcome to Cosmo!
The prey watches the predator set the trap and aren't smart enough to not step in it...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi CRYSTAL!!.....I hope that this poetic unburdening helped you to move on from what could only have been called a living nightmare!!...... you've done an excellent job of conveying your personal truths!!...... be proud...... you're a survivor!!.......ALL STARS!!...... well done....... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?â´â¤
wow thank you so much I really didn't expect this much feedback from all of you guys I really appreciate itÂ
Very well done thoroughly enjoyed it :)
Thanks