Extra Time

I need so much
To see my wrongs
To right my rights
Extra time.
I left all behind
To far to wind
I need extra time.
Fire burns within
skin paper thin
In need of extra time.
I don't have much left
I'm done for soon
Im seeing in depth
How much time
I need so much

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Comments
I love the continuation of that "I need time" theme throughout the poem. It really hits you with that sense of urgency! All start brother poet
bc
thanks it means alot
I'm glad I caught this one, it has this strange aura about it where your character seems very intent on making it known that he needs time but he's so absorbed in making the most of it that every time he mentions it just becomes less important to say it haha I may be reading into it too much but I totally agree with Baby Canary, this was a great write it makes one think.
-Ano-
Nice theory and I appreciate it