Extra Time

I love the continuation of that "I need time" theme throughout the poem. It really hits you with that sense of urgency! All start brother poet 
bc

I'm glad I caught this one, it has this strange aura about it where your character seems very intent on making it known that he needs time but he's so absorbed in making the most of it that every time he mentions it just becomes less important to say it haha I may be reading into it too much but I totally agree with Baby Canary, this was a great write it makes one think.
-Ano-