Eyes From Beyond And Above.....
Would that you were worthy to suffer something for love
What glorious understanding would then be yours
How happy the Saints and the Gods from above
Would be to find your warmth and tenderness adored
How happy I would be as well, to know that a part of me could tell
The difference between the heart of things
And the treasons that grow in hell
What a marvelous sound would ring through the streets
As your innocence spread through the hearts of men
Appreciated and recognized by angelic feats
Whispered and written again and again
By the eyes that watched from above
Like the purist of the Templar Knights
The soldiers that protected Our Lord
Yours would be the songs of faith
Written by poets and countrymen throughout the world
All of these things and so much more
If you were worthy to suffer for love
What glorious understanding would then be yours
But as I observe you with eyes from above
I have yet to find your heartbeat with love
And I am utterly dismayed
For it's true that you have forgotten the word
Given from eyes far beyond and above
And today from my knees I did pray
That you learn these lessons of Love.....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
you are "crazy" good!!! I almost don't wanna write any more..lol........amazing...
BB
Hi Bahar, WOW I don't know exactly how to respond to that except to say....I had a feeling I'd hear from you again........I know you were joking but, never stop writing, the possibilities are too great, ........I look forward to reading more from you...........I thank you for your kind words.........smiles,......tony xx
Very nice work Tony !
very deep!!!
you deserved 5 stars...
Nikos Z
Hey Nikos, so glad you liked it my friend........hope things are cool in your neck of the woods........much appreciated...........tony xx
You are really great my friend!..The following lines are source of our motivation-
"If you were worthy to suffer for love
what glorious understanding would then be yours
But as I observe you with eyes from above
I have yet to find your heartbeat with love"
With Sincere Love,
Ravindra, you are "really great" too. Thanks for picking my favorite lines from that poem.........you're cool.....tony xx
I totally agree with everyone on here T` I loved it, it`s really beautifully written. Well done sweety. G xx