Poem -
eye's forever closed .
My mind is somewhere else tonight
It drifted away upon his beckoning
I'm left with a heart
beat so strong Its deafening
His tender heart
caressing my thoughts
Each touch
A soft whisper
taunting my soul
My heart is begging him near
In my mind his beautiful vision
So clear
I close my eyes
He is here
Nothing else matters my dear
Those words like heaven
Within my ear
Afraid to open my eye's
As they cease
withholding the tears
He could just disappear
I wish to stay here
Inside his embrace
Seeking my eye's forever closed
Upon my face.
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Comments
Lovely, Romantic, Yearning!!!..........great read Big Sis!..........I Love how you've been experimenting with different formats..........and rhyme schemes............well done Deano.........you got skills girl!!...........smiles.......TÂ xx
Heya my sweet brother tony, thanks heaps babe, i was writing like this for a while back towards may, i guess i got lazy or lost in others style, but in back and loving the words pouring out of my constantly moving brain haha, love ya heaps,
your sis nardine xoxo