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Eyes I'll never meet

To shaken to speak 

eyes I'll never meet 

Head to the ground 

while the world goes round 

I can't see a thing 

no avail 

your words impale 

I want to smile, I'll beg 

I'll plea 

I'll get on my knees 

you make me bleed 

No one sees you're in my head 

wish I was dead 

sanity's gone to shreds 

I won't complain, not after all the pain 

Judgements smeared

like a broken mirror 

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Tony Taylor

WOW!!! ~CLOUDS!!...... this is a great stream of consciousness flowing of staccato phrasing as it passes through the minds eye of your reader......a VERY unique abstractness to delivering a sense of depression and simply being lost.......I LOVE the word choices you've made here....... cool formatting as well.......ALL STARS :::::PINNED!!!!......well done my friend!!...... look forward to more from you...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO !!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.   ?

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Clouds

Wowza! 

Thanks for all the positivity :D

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