Shimmering Substance

I
The blue sky and the land flat;ย
the sun talking out loud to me;ย
Eyes in the heat coming off the roadย winking at me floating...laughing at me
I keep going, pushing my legs onward onwardย ..................
II
I see your house, the door opensย
The lightning strikes me...itโs youย a breeze,
you order rain and it comes, the eyes in the heat go away..
and you in that voice sweet and musical, word to me:
what took you so longย my love
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Hey MARK!!...VERY cool images just flying by in that first stanza...... like you were running or something..... and then the second stanza ~ STOPS & lightning strikes ~ she's there... hey!......" What took you so long my Love!?"......VERY clever stuff bro!!..... Loved it!!......ALL STARS....... well done my friend!!........T xo
Tony-thanks glad you liked it...........
Cherie-glad there is wasย Great happy feeling...Thank you ย this happened to me June......................
.............. ย disclaimer-ย (no not someone else ย V.A. I know you still look)ย
wonderfully penned mark, it is wonderful to read such a work of art!
Poetess-so very nice of you to say...thank you