Faded
Gone so far a faded star, I'm to deep in to stop now, i stepped right in my own trap and i don't want help out.
I have a thousand reasons why I'm here, and a million more why i should stay. You don't have to understand, and its better that you don't even try at all. I've been here to long and i don't want you to fall in the same place I'm at. All I'll do is ruin you and your much better then that.
This place has darkened and the shadows on me so let me be. I've tried everything in my power to change but the formation never takes its place, so what Else is left for me to do? i cant go back and time keeps moving on, and for some reason i find myself having no regrets on what I've done...
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Hey JESSICA!!.... the essence of this write being ADDICTION sets the tone for what is quite a lovely foundation for poetic advice......a type of poetic prose that would come across even MORE powerfully if you formatted it differently (please don't take that the wrong way ~ it was meant truly respectfully)....... anyway, I found some of the phrasing to be quite extraordinary in tone and phrasing ~ " This place has darkened and the shadow's on me, so let me be..".....VERY lyrically poetic..... so much of this could be a song lyric!!....I could go on & on..... but...... suffice it to say......ALL STARS!!..... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴♥☀??
Thank you so much. It was originally intended to be a song. But figured I’d keep it simple. Plus I’m not very talented with instruments haha