Poem -
Fall
What used to be so vibrant
What once replete with living
Now starved of nutrition
Now withers, sallow, sick
Turns down its squalid head
Turns meek, descends to earth
Blown backward and forth
Blown by daunting winds
Finds residual rest
Finds demise and decay
Last thought would be
Last time I saw you
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Life is funny. It is never the same for anyone. You look at fall and see wither and decay. I look and see the beginning of new life. I understand that you are relating this to someone not there and I see the pain of loss. Yet with all loss is something gained. This is a very nice poem and it made me think! Good poems do that! Good job, Anthony
Beautifully said Anthony!
i appreciate your perspective!
Thanks again and wish you well!
Excellent write Stephen :)
Hey thanks Jason!
a speck of grief released with this one!
hope you and your family have a splendid holiday!
thanks again
Stephen you write beautifully, eloquently
and meaningfully, it's a 5 star poem!!
best wishes from Jai :)
~~jai
truly means a lot my friend! I greatly appreciate your comments!
hope you are well!
take care
jai
truly means a lot my friend! I greatly appreciate your comments!
hope you are well!
take care