Poem -
FALSE WIND (Part l)
FALSE WIND (Part l)
FALSE WINDย
HAS BLOWN THROUGH
BLOWN GREEN LEAVES AWAY
YET THE BARE TREE
STANDS TALL THROUGH
LONG DARK COLD WINTER DAYS
THOUGH IT SHIVERED
IT QUIVERED
WITHERED
OLD SHOOTS TO GROW AGAIN
LANGUAGE OF BIRDSย
DISCERNABLE TO HEAR
SCARED ALMOST SILENT AFRAID
THROUGH DESOLATE AIR
ON FALSE WIND
FALSE WIND
FALSE WIND
Comments
Hey BLAKE!!
I can't believe no one saw this yesterday... it's VERY creative and VERY well delivered.....a fine sense of poetic rhythm and timing letting us know you have obviously written before..... conveying here a sense ofย strength through the storm and its aftermath...... having discerned the 'falseness' within the scenario.........ALL STARS!!...... hope I didn't misinterpret this completely (smiles)........ regardless, compelling stuff dear poet brother..... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo.ย : )