Poem -

Farewell

i need an angel,
one who will stay
by my side, as the
demons attempt to
drag me down.

i need an angel,
one who will not
abandon me, as the
fire begins to burn,
hotter, out of control.

i need an angel,
one who will stand
next to me, as the
world crumbles from
my footsteps.

i need an angel,
one who will catch
me, as i fall, as i
plummet to the hard,
stoney ground below.

i need an angel,
one who will hold
on as i rage and
cry purging the
anger within.

i need an angel.

i ...
need ...
an ...
angel ...
to ...
say ...
farewell ...
 
farewell ...

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BLOSSOM

Ben this was a great poem; loved the structure and the use of repetition on each stanza, the first line starting 'I need an angel' then the variation to the reasoning behind.  Written very well with a layout that made reading your work a pleasure.  Great end also; so sad.  I really like your style in this write and look forward to reading more from you.  A big vote from me:)

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Ben Lukacs

Thank you very much, i'm planning on turning this one into a song

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