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FATALITY

FATALITY

She sent you back to me like this?!
Desiccated, dried up and empty!
Baby, didn’t you understand?
Didn’t you know?
I loved you enough to watch you
Pack your clothes and listen
To you excuse your affair with her
Because I wasn’t satisfying you,
Because our relationship had lost
Its spark and you were bored.

Damn! She sent you back to me like this?
Emotionless… your energy stagnant,
Your heart shipwrecked and barnacled
Weighted down with hurt and pain.
You said she had many endearing qualities.
What happened to her promise of paradise!
Didn’t all that freaky sex blow your mind!
Weren't her BJ's the best you ever had?!
Didn’t she agree to the threesome?
Didn’t she make that fantasy come true for you?!

Shit!  She sent you back to me like this?!
I heard that the two of you went to every party
Had the best weed and the coke was phenomenal.
Didn’t you understand that you were pouring
Yourself into an empty person who would
Eventually suck you totally dry then leave?
You were never intended to be a permanent
Commitment…you were a dalliance, a bauble
To be played with until your value was negligible.
Now, she wants to trade you in for a new model!

Fuck! She sent you back to me like this?!
Raw, flayed and wanting a home in my arms!
Castigated for your inability to keep her entertained
She scraped every layer of you off and kicked
You out to return to me a stranger!
What do you expect of me now that I’ve moved on?
When you left you said things that can’t be unsaid.
Hate you, no…forgive you, yes, I can do that…
But I won’t take you back; we’re done…
This incident was a crash and burn fatality.

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Michael Walston

I love how you use your words to define how you feel in a different view than the norm. :) 5 Stars!

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Valerie Beasley...

Michael!  Thank you so much for your supportive comments.  Much appreciated…thanks for the stars too!

val

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Michael Walston

You are welcome, you support my art so I of course return the favor! Keep up the awesome art!

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Carey Milton

This is gold Val!! Really really love it!! Big vote from me girl :) x

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Valerie Beasley...

Carey!  Hi!  Glad you like this write!  Thanks so much!

val

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