Poem -
Feel
What is this
Craving.
Why do I feel
Nothing.
Maybe just one
Will make me feel
Something.
The warmth
That it brings
Drips down
The seams
In my skin.
The people who love me
They cry
Because of my
Sins.
The more I
Want it
The less,
I notice,
I feel.
But this craving
Which causes such
Disappointment and
Disgust burns my
Skin and fills me with
Lust for a time that I,
Will finally
Feel.
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Comments
This is a superb piece sweetie. It`s very well written and clearly expressed. Everyone will relate to depression and difficult feelings of low self esteem that we all suffer from at some point in our lives that are so difficult and hard to understand especially when the sufferer is very young and this piece portrays those feelings very well sweetie. Well done honey for an excellent poem. I find poetry very cathartic as it helps me to get those feelings of depression out and it helps others to understand these difficulties that we all experience in our teens. There is a lot of help these days thank heavens and it`s good that we now have councilors in schools for pupils. They can help a great deal because they are specially trained for these problems. They are able to help us to learn how to think in a different way and that helps us to feel more positive about life and ourselves. Well done sweetie, this is a very good piece.
God bless
Love G xx