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Feeling all burned out 😟

Feeling all burned out 😟

You gotta do what you do everyday is the very same

Just to keep yourself afloat and on top of your game

Life is just like that raging inferno that ignites from little flickers from a flame

But at times our fire turns to embers after we have burned it out and thats a crying shame..
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We wake up stretching and yawning if we are lucky enough to have slept 

Though there are some of us who cannot rest for love nor money with an insomnia intercept

So we start a brand new morning feeling weather beaten and windswept

Now I can speak from years of experience that this is diabolical  and it makes one feel so inactively inept..
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Cruising along at ninety miles per hour

Coz this is just what living life is like constantly climbing steps and stairs on a skyscraper tower

And that is all very well if one feels full of beans and has that super energised power

Yet that zest of zing has fizzled out because of sleeplessness leaving you feeling like a wilted flower..

 

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Being Me

Awwww...Jill. I hope you manage to get a good nights sleep soon. Hugs ⚘x

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Jill Tait

Awww God knows but I try my lovely 💕❤️💕

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Marion

I feel the despair in this Jill...hugs 💕

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Jill Tait

Awww one day I’ll rest forever teehee 💕❤️💕

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Shaun Cronick

Jill, how well you write and present it  how it really is and really FEELS like.
Sometimes ten feet tall but its cruel and most unwanted polar opposite that of being flat as a proverbial pancake.
Its a real toughie to try and overcome and you must have heard and dare say tried all remedies and magical wonder potions and so called cures which speaking from experience have null effect.
All I can say and offer is that one gets a good/adequate nights sleep sometimes and be thankful for small tender mercies, you know those welcomed and cherished little victories.
Hang in there Jill and your not the only one and thanks for sharing your poem of angst to make others aware.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Full honours gratefully bestowed and I wish you well and its the lap of the gods tonight for us both my poetic penfriend.❤️
 
 

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Jill Tait

Awww right back at ya my lovely faraway friend ❤️💙❤️

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Jill Tait

Awww I’ll no doubt survive a while longer teehee but Thanks so much for your continuous support and kindness my catchup kid 💕💙💕

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Shaun Cronick

And trying to give 5 worthy stars would give anyone a sleepless bloody night.

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Jill Tait

Teehee stupid Cosmo pml its maybes not any rest either tho lmao 💕🤣💕

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Jill Tait

Awwww u r too kind my lovely lass ❤️❤️❤️

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