Poem -
feeling of love
The touch of his soft hand's against my face made me feel all warm
Β like if i was near a burning fire and the heat from Β that fire
shoot through his hands straight onto my face.ΒAnd with that warm feeling from his hands made me feel safe, knowing that he love's me for me that he would' notΒ change me at all.Β
But when he moved his hands away i started to feel really cold like a block of
ice floating in the ocean and also feeling unsafe made
me worry that i did something wrong that he did'nt love me anymore.
But then he comes up behind me and turns me around and pulls me into him, then grabs my face again and kisses me. And once again that warm feeling from his hands comes rushing back
Comments
this is my first time writing a poem at all so im really nervous
I really enjoyed reading your poem,and could his love for her...
Thanks Rosanne Cline means heapsΒ
Your welcome sweetie, have a great day
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You expressed yourself well here, emily-anne. Don't be nervous about writing and sharing your posts. I know the first post is always nerve wracking, lol, but you should be proud of this poem. I look forward to reading more from you π
Tina x
Thanks heaps TinaΒ
First time writing and your first entry on here, and already I felt the deep passion in your heart through your beautiful words.
MarvelousππππππΊπ
Oh and welcome to Cosmo π β
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Thanks heaps
Hello emily-anne...
Welcome to Cosmo!
I found Cosmo in July of 2014...
It took me until the end of November to actually hit post...
It took me a while to understand how to communicate on the site...
I really felt like, what am I doing?
People were very patient, welcoming, very sweet and kind...
May you feel the same...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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Thank you sparrowsong