Poem - 20 June 2018, 01:37

feeling of love

The touch of his soft hand's against my face made me feel all warm
like if i was near a burning fire and the heat from that fire
shoot through his hands straight onto my face.

And with that warm feeling from his hands made me feel safe, knowing that he love's me for me that he would' not change me at all.

But when he moved his hands away i started to feel really cold like a block of

ice floating in the ocean and also feeling unsafe made
me worry that i did something wrong that he did'nt love me anymore.

But then he comes up behind me and turns me around and pulls me into him, then grabs my face again and kisses me. And once again that warm feeling from his hands comes rushing back

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Poetry Genre:

Romance

Topic:

Love

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emily-anne20 June 2018, 01:38

this is my first time writing a poem at all so im really nervous

Rosanna Cline20 June 2018, 03:17

I really enjoyed reading your poem,and could his love for her...

emily-anne20 June 2018, 04:53

Thanks Rosanne Cline means heaps

Rosanna Cline20 June 2018, 06:05

Your welcome sweetie, have a great day

Tina20 June 2018, 06:47

You expressed yourself well here, emily-anne. Don't be nervous about writing and sharing your posts. I know the first post is always nerve wracking, lol, but you should be proud of this poem. I look forward to reading more from you 😊

Tina x

emily-anne20 June 2018, 18:34

Thanks heaps Tina