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Feeling the Blues

Feeling the Blues

I can pin point
Down to a millisecond
When I could have saved face

But that pin prick
Pops the dream like a balloon
I keep the carcass just in case

I find myself speechless
Can you believe this
Me...with nothing to say?

When the falcons lost the big one
Is the same as you and me
So close to fucking perfect
And it took the life out of me

So congrats and shit
No really I mean it
I'll be thinking of you
While I'm fucking feeling the blues

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Jason Brown

But that pin prick
Pops the dream like a balloon
I keep the carcass just in case

Sparse, pained and very well written.

J ;)

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Donna Walton

I can't help feeling bitterness coming through your words but please forgive me if I'm wrong, I'm new to giving comments, through fear, because I am notorious for my complete lack of tact and diplomacy lol.xo

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