Poem -
Feelings
In my own fear I have begun to
Drown,
coming so close to having a
breakdown
I'm feeling so lost and so very
Confused,
As if my feelings have been beaten and bruised.
Seriously don't even know what more
Wrong I can do,
wishing life would throw me a darn
Clue.
I've been making so many dumb choices and decisions, so it seems,
Afraid of my own damn dreams.
Ever since my baby was born early I've felt so numb,
How could I really still be this damn
dumb.
I want to run, and I want to
cry,
but my eyes won't leak for they are to
dry.
So much has got me to the point I feel
doomed,
My fears and anxiety have my life so
consumed.
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Comments
Wow, Yvette! What powerful emotion in this poem. A feeling of discontent... I can relate to a feeling of loss, without a purpose. I find, that it is great to write it all out and post poems online for relief. But friends and family can also help too! I really enjoyed this write and the challenges it stands for... But remember you are not alone! ;).
Thank you
To echo the last comment Yvette , Wow , What a strong raw piece of poetry you have put forward here , You point a straight light at the battles many have inside and express the torments beautifully , Kudos for an excellent and brave poem , Chris :)
Thank you
Wow YVETTE!!....you've been on here since 2013......a year longer than me....you certainly know the limerick metering well....and you've painted what's going with you beautifully here......I like to remember that life does this.......the ups and the downs......and then I top it off with that cliche' expression ~ "This Too Shall Pass!"......I Love that you use poetry for such powerful self expression......ALL STARS & PINNED!......thanx for sharing this dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )