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FINALLY !

FINALLY !

what a mix of emotion's
finally you find someone "you think",
care's for you in the way you want
and it's taken in a split second
loving you with word's only that's all it is with them
action's don't speak louder that their's
so far what's spoken or written ,has yet to be seen
a lifetime of listening,"not my dream"
finally you think you have met the one
but it's over before it's begun
hope will prevail
finally again i will meet that someone
the circle will go round until action's have made
their mark along with the precious word's
finally understanding myself in what i need
stronger and patient to find that special one
wiser and honest to give myself that chance 
of knowing before it start's  who is worthy
finally

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James Whaley

Dear Tina,

How many of us seem weak compared to the power of another's expectation of us? How many of us lock the door and turn off the light because of our impatience. When we report the news of how others failed us- are we fair in our judgement? Maybe hope will prevail!

                                                                                                                         Dark Horse

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Tina Moore

hi james
              patience is a virtue that i have   its the meaning in words  that pose the question  is this for real?  is this going to go on forever ? usually out of a situation like that  is the best friendship anyone can have  so acceptance takes place  so to let both carry on  with some kind of meaning to it    love is never easy   but knowing it is  love   makes harder choices  patience is a virtue      thanx for your input  james
                                                                                                                               tina x

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Jimmy Arnold

Hey (Ms) Tina,

Sad to say Tna but if t departs from your grasp in such a short instance, such as you have conveyed, it never was a surety from the start and it all, was just a fasad in the eyes of the abuser of this tactic, though true love on your end it has  exuberated thus exacerbates all the chemical make ups, of lust on the other, leaving a once promising full heart, (once again), empty, a victim to trust and again, entrenched in search.Why is it always the kind and good at heart, that always have to suffer from all the questionable, (what ifs and i should have, aspects) in life? Hope will prevail and as stated, for everyone, there do exist the right one for all in search of but why should it always have to consist with having to endure the heart ache of having the trial and era stigmatism, that has to go along with the constant search, of finding that Mr. or Ms. right? Emotions run to deep and can be to easily walked upon, in these eluding searches, for them to constantly be put on display and taken advantage of,but these are the chances we take and has to accept to find that which we know exists out there for us all, so giving up mustn't be a factor if succeeding is to be your final acquisition..Very nice and truly serious poem..

Take Care Tina,

Jimmy

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Tina Moore

thank you jim   the heart not always gets what it wants but if strong can carry on  even in a circle as things are learn because of this  so its easier to feel the next time  more carefully  thank you jimmy for the honest  input          tina x

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Jimmy Arnold

That which you just stated, was and is ever so true Tina....Well delivered...

Jimmy

The heart not always gets what it wants but if strong, can carry on  even in a circle, as things are learned because of this,  so its easier to feel the next time  more carefully....... 

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Tina Moore

thank you chris   honesty is in the poem  sometimes  it has to have a little to make the poem your own to look back on and have no regrets  and my strength will as you say triumpth over it all      thanx chris
                                                                                                                      all the best
                                                                                                                              tina x

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Tina Moore

thank you susan    all the best    tina x

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