Poem -
Fire
My challenge
Like 12 Pin it 5Capable of epic proportions,
I am powerful,
I am the mystic,
Elegant in dance,
All things romanced,
I am bleak!
Formidable in my touch,
I caress, distress,
All things in my wake,
I leave only remants in my display,
Dissaray and ash,
Do not forsake!
I am thy ally,
I am warmth,
Eater of cold nights,
I do not spite,Β
I smite if angered,
Left in disrespect,
I will ravage the land and torch the skies,
Do not neglect!
I am an explosive enigma,
I'll rip through bough and mire,
I am the allure of men,
The giver and taker of life,
I am fire!
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Brilliant!Β I love this, Simon x
Thank you for stopping by ? I really appreciate your supportΒ
My Dear Simon,
You really lit this one up!Β HOT, HOT, HOT!!Β Even the best fire department would have trouble extinguishing it.
I can't wait to answer the challenge.
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry it means alot
You've brilliantly captured this element in all its frightening waves.
Thank you Ian ?
wow such brilliance. Pinned for perfection!
Thank you Lisa ?
Wow SIMON!!β¦..I LOVE that you decided to write this in 'first person'....it makes it that much more powerful and electric!!β¦..The tone and the movement you've created with this VERY well crafted phrasing works beautifully here!!β¦...ALL STARS!!β¦...well penned dear poet brother!!β¦β¦.LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦β¦.TY xoΒ : )
Thank you Tony ? it means alot
I love a good fire.
Great write SimonΒ - SydΒ
great job!
Thank you ?
You packed a whole lot of emotion into one poem. The end was my favorite part. With all the devastation that fire can bring, it also represents life.Β It's survival and it's also devastating at the same time. The language is brilliant.
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