Five Stars

I could collaborate the mindsÂ
All insightful conversations of great bullshit,Â
But scrapping an unrecycleable admirationÂ
Amongst one's thoughtsÂ
Of highly regarded peers;Â
In caring less for proceedings of........Â
Flying knowledgeable knivesÂ
Meant in attempts to amputateÂ
The unreal legs,Â
Of men made a'words.Â
.........Third party viewÂ
Just another pair of shoes,Â
Keeping, in around about mindÂ
Judging for.....and withÂ
Both sides point.Â
..........Do you really think it betterÂ
To know more than another,Â
Not so sure it makes you dangerousÂ
But a danger to yourself;Â
Damn, strongly flowing riversÂ
Of belief bleeds,Â
And if you think your made-up truthsÂ
Will really set you free.Â
I excuse the pompous expertiseÂ
Accept your new heightened level of naive.

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Comments
very nice
Well thank you Amber.
Devon, dude I'm running out of flowers to throw at you; superb passion and energy in this write, yes I agree with the star thing being a lazy person's way of expressing how they may feel about a write, I say make a comment; good or bad; be upfront....on a side note; I kinda like the tone round here recently; nothing wrong with emotion; can spark inspiration....keep kickin arse and takin names, pal....cheers
Christopher my man thanks but save your flowers for the ladies lol. Yeah and I won't lie I've left the stars without a comment and thought that was lazy and worthless. I really appreciate this comment man you brought a smile to my face.