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Five Stars

Five Stars

I could collaborate the minds 
All insightful conversations of great bullshit, 
But scrapping an unrecycleable admiration 
Amongst one's thoughts 
Of highly regarded peers; 
In caring less for proceedings of........ 
Flying knowledgeable knives 
Meant in attempts to amputate 
The unreal legs, 
Of men made a'words. 
.........Third party view 
Just another pair of shoes, 
Keeping, in around about mind 
Judging for.....and with 
Both sides point. 
..........Do you really think it better 
To know more than another, 
Not so sure it makes you dangerous 
But a danger to yourself; 
Damn, strongly flowing rivers 
Of belief bleeds, 
And if you think your made-up truths 
Will really set you free. 
I excuse the pompous expertise 
Accept your new heightened level of naive.

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Christopher Correia

Devon, dude I'm running out of flowers to throw at you; superb passion and energy in this write, yes I agree with the star thing being a lazy person's way of expressing how they may feel about a write, I say make a comment; good or bad; be upfront....on a side note; I kinda like the tone round here recently; nothing wrong with emotion; can spark inspiration....keep kickin arse and takin names, pal....cheers

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Devon La Porte

Christopher my man thanks but save your flowers for the ladies lol. Yeah and I won't lie I've left the stars without a comment and thought that was lazy and worthless. I really appreciate this comment man you brought a smile to my face.

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