Poem -
flames of passion
flame of passion
soar high,red and orange at it's hottest
wild in the fire before me wavering intense vision's
"almost,!" taking me closer
to rise with those emblem's of desire
burning in the heat of a past moment
our bodies entwined before a glorious "love god"
steaming immense power of the unknown
slow kisses
heavy emotion's
ecstasy at it's best
erotica at it's highest
but the flame's burn down
i'm reminded of the long ago past
alone and cold without you
the fire will ignite again
with a new love
surly a flame of passion will rise again!
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Comments
Symbolism is well thought out on this. Great poem, easy read, raw and clean.
lovely poem, you can almost feel it
great work
thank you both fadhl and asmaa for your comments best wish's tina
Wow Tina,
What a gorgeous poem on burning passion lost too ashes before to soon, for no heart rejects this desired burn or cares to be immune, this burning that catches on too soon, takes us through the roof and atop of the moon, just to crash us back too the ground without notice and boom boom.
So as long as we get back up with holding this burning at the heart, we can surely get up stronger than ever before too find that burning passion and what is the greatest love.
Kindest regards
Shirley
thank you shirley,true saying, rise from the ashes thank you
all the best tina
thank you williamsJl i loved writing this piece tina
I've read a few of your pieces and the one thing that stands out to me is your passion. Your heart shows in every piece I've read thus far. You write beautifully! It is really a shame that this has not been nominated. It is probably my favorite so far. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Best regards,
Brian
thank you a lot brian its funny this is one of my favourite pieces too your comment meant a lot thank you best wishs
tina
You are very welcome Tina.
Best wishes,
Brian
thanx angel i love writing that stuff lol tina x