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Flat

Flat

lay in the daisies on the ground..
and watch the clouds float by,
fluffy cotton elephants..
thinking, how can the world
be round..we would all slip off..
the clouds puffed and rolled..
at a leisurely pace,
not a thousand miles a minute..
What is this thing called gravity. ?
a prisoner in its elements..!
Gravity keeps your feet on the ground,
so they say, what goes up must come down..
I cant believe the world is round..
and we're spinning in Space at an
astronomical rate..
The moon and sun would be a blur
as we passed by it wouldn't occur..
We're flat and static ..or my ears
would pop..
I'd be on the toilet throwing up..

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Tony Taylor

This is friggin' great PAULINE!!….VERY charming in its lightheartedness and VERY well paced...especially when read aloud!!…..the rhythm and timing are perfect and is brought to even higher level of charm when taken in context with the picture representing it!!…...ALL STARS & PINNED!!…..very much enjoyed this dear poet sister!!…….LOVE & ROCKETS!!…...T xo  : )

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Pratibha Savani

Omg I totally love this! Excellent poetry from a child's point of view. So warm and lighthearted and love the elements of science included. Well deserved -  sssooo pinned!! Px 

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pauline codd

Thankyou my poetic friends...but I actually believe it.    

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