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Flawed #2

there was no obvious bruise
or dent, nor crease
or tear ..

in fact, everything at first
seemed quite simply
perfect ..

everything, except that is,
for the two of us,
I fear
..

 

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Gwendoline

Ouch..the  undercurrent pain penned perfectly here Nev. The inability to accept the cracks are there. How many of us have made the world believe life is rosey when actually it’s full of lemons. A good write my friend x    

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Neville

Ha .. bless you G .. I may not yet quite have gone bananas, but I am surrounded by bunches of them lemons :) x

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Mark Olcott

well done! who could not relate? or understand?

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Neville

How kind is that .. thank you Mark & most kindly too sir :)

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Being Me

Another perfect piece of poetry. Sharp and so very beautifully expressed x

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Neville

Too kind you are Tina n truly x

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RG

Been there felt that… great write!

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Neville

Thank you kindly sir Robert 

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