Poem - 28 January 2023, 02:03 Flawed #2 Neville there was no obvious bruise or dent, nor crease or tear .. in fact, everything at first seemed quite simply perfect .. everything, except that is, for the two of us, I fear .. Â Like 5 Pin it 4 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 669 Rating: Total votes: 5 Tags: Complications Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Reality Listed in: Contest Entries 8 comments
Gwendoline28 January 2023, 03:34 Ouch..the  undercurrent pain penned perfectly here Nev. The inability to accept the cracks are there. How many of us have made the world believe life is rosey when actually it’s full of lemons. A good write my friend x   Reply
Neville29 January 2023, 01:49 Ha .. bless you G .. I may not yet quite have gone bananas, but I am surrounded by bunches of them lemons :) x Reply
Being Me28 January 2023, 08:41 Another perfect piece of poetry. Sharp and so very beautifully expressed x Reply
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Ouch..the  undercurrent pain penned perfectly here Nev. The inability to accept the cracks are there. How many of us have made the world believe life is rosey when actually it’s full of lemons. A good write my friend x  Â
Ha .. bless you G .. I may not yet quite have gone bananas, but I am surrounded by bunches of them lemons :) x
well done! who could not relate? or understand?
How kind is that .. thank you Mark & most kindly too sir :)
Another perfect piece of poetry. Sharp and so very beautifully expressed x
Too kind you are Tina n truly x
Been there felt that… great write!
Thank you kindly sir RobertÂ