Poem -

One More Open Verdict For the Road

She came out of the sky like
a rocket
and for a moment, or maybe
not quite
that long, he thought she was
trying to
re-route herself, from some
kind of crazy
kamikaze dive or something ..
But then,
how wrong could he possibly
be and how
far from the truth .. she could
not fly at all
could she, and on reflection,
it seems that she
either fell, or she was pushed ..

 

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Neville

Maybe but some feel it more than others .. Neville 

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Being Me

When someone comes out of the sky like that it can only mean they fell or were pushed. Unless they are wearing a parachute. Or have wings. Or are riding on a broomstick.
Your poetry is full of metaphors and such so i do realise you are not meaning this literally. You are a clever writer and I do love the way you write your words xx

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