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Laszlo, I can only apologise for having passed over this write.  It was a beautiful tale, and gave me tingles towards the end.  The opening lines were so moving 

She is a flower lady, a forgotten child of the evening.
Even if she was known once by a name,

no-one remembers that now...nobody cares.

On the corner of Hope and Inspiration, she sells flowers.

A delightful opening, (particularly the line highlighted) to a delightful write.  A vote from me.  A worthy nomination Laszlo and I look forward to reading more of your work :)

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