Poem -
Flowers in the ground (by the dead poets)
The great poets unreadÂ
Like flowers in the ground
Untouched and silent
There rests amongst us
A death before the graveÂ
On the tomb of Apollo
His arms holding the edges
And his soul free at lastÂ
I am a poet
Whose fears realizedÂ
Stabbed by the sword of DamoclesÂ
Unto the tyrants' bedÂ
In the fires of the great city of AtheniaÂ
Through the market stalls of democracy
Are inscribed the poet's rites
In our thoughts we are perished and in dreams
 we are whole again, forevermore
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Comments
you always help me feel dignityÂ
thank you really, you always help me.Â
Best wishes....JaiÂ
lovely write Jai x
Thanks Susan, pls join me for ChristmasÂ
lunch, I wish!!Â
Appreciate u reading me!!
Jai,
You really killed this one,(in a very good way).......your style is like stepping stones in a sea of fire, you carefully but methodically,(without missing one step) and without fear of your complete fire engulfed surrounding, you select your path of directions,(just as you select your choice of words), in your poems, in a manner in which, ever word that precedes the next, tells the reasons and meanings of the birth of your master pieces,all the way, to its final climatic end and you sway (not), from your method of write, no matter what the poem curtails....Your poems truly captures and holds the complete attention of your readers... Reminds me of the style of my friend and brother,Chris Correia. Power in both, of the pens you two yield......
Best of all regards,
Jim
I ascribe the source of the poemÂ
to the soul, I am really a computerÂ
writing this, my brain is hardwareÂ
my soul is software, ay Jai acceptÂ
the comment; only if  you considerÂ
that the person more relevant to theÂ
poem is the reader, ok I accept,Â
Chris sometimes I talk to my selfÂ
to you I say thank you and merry ChristmasÂ
come for lunch we share war stories and
whisky, Luv from Jai :)Â Â
Rock on Jai...Rock on....Your arsenal of writing, boast no limit..........like that upper comment...
Keep cool,
Jim
trying to keep coolÂ
38 Celsius whew hot hereÂ
thank you!Â
Wow!!!! I guess that closing in my last comment was fitting...
Jim
Wow. You blow my mind sometimes. :-) Thanks for that!
Where are we? Here, there,Â
everywhere we are, thanks Random!!Â