Poem -
Flying The Sea
softly softly into my soul
reaching for me
lets go and see
up and away
out of the day
flying the sea...
Up
we are free
up past the sun
unicorns wait
call them for me
ride them
we're free
pastel lit shadows
new realm in
new sky
'let's do some living
after we die'
M ~
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Wonderful :)
Thankyou 😊
Hi Marion,
After reading the last lines I then read the whole poem again and it made perfect sense. Great poem.
Hope you're keeping well - Syd
Thanks Syd 😊
Hello Marion and it's good to see that dreamers still exist and weave into wonderous words their dreams.
Love the ending and what it can bestow, one day.
Captivating write and I also hope you are keeping well. 💕
Hi Shaun...thankyou...I can't take credit for the last lines they are from the song Wild Horses by the Stones and later Susan Boyle...x
Marion clearly and respectfully those last lines, regardless of whoever wrote them, have served a larger and more profound purpose in life and passing.
I'm well, just out of the poetry loop for while with family matters.
Now sorted out.
I am wishing you well my friend. x.
You too.Shaun...looking forward to reading you're next work...all the best x
Marion my next work will be upped on Thursday 23rd of this month it'll be part 1 of a larger construct which will be upped in its entirety in early December.
It's a labour of love to write and when I can spare it. x.
Look forward to it x