Poem -

Flying Trout

Flying Trout

Years of not laughing much

Realizing how much it means

To laugh out loud to stand up

Instead of sucking down some vinegar

Arguing with that voice 

That tells you this is a box, to face it

Its starts as a box

Now it's a boat to rock in, dart for the flying trout

Sometimes it's what brings it out

Like when there's a smile, a flare in the heart, A spark in the mind

Like a drink of water 

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Devon La Porte

Hello Tangelo Tree, I enjoyed this write and what I interpreted was the ideas that are born when writing and how simple as a drink of water or complicated that can be to come up with. Love the metaphors and imagery in this very cool write. 

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sparrowsong

Hello Tangelo...

Great write! 

Alot of transformations here...

I love what you did with the box...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Tangelo Tree

Hi, thank you both. I'm glad you liked the writing...I appreciate the comments. I was watching Amy Schumer and LOLd it felt so great to laugh again. Yes transformation, Have a great weekend :) 

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