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follow me

follow me

carefully remove the packaging
do not over handle
if you want her to stay in place
a little warmth from your hand
will greatly increase the chances
I would advise to take hold
and transfer from yourself to her
all that is good in your heart
for she is, an open verse
to each and every word you give

to remove..do all above in reverse.

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Lost

Clever ending. "for she is, an open verse" that is saying a lot. Well done

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pauline codd

idea came from applying a pain patch..there's another poem there..thanks..

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pauline codd

my writing may be a bit confusing...it reads like stripping a woman...it also reads like baggage and packaging....how you interpret it...is with what tools or mood you have..I think I write in concepts sometimes..and if other's don't have these concepts..it may seem puzzling..it bugs me too. thanks.Charlotte...I may be over my love writings vendetta now..lol ...not.

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