For my Future
Come to me, my love
Gather 'round my exuberance
For a mystical time is nearing
Marching, like strange passersby
On an old wooden boardwalk,
Covered by love's canopy
And sandy castles
On the shores of this,
Our romance
Burgeoning clearly,
Where the waves of emotion
Are constantly crashing
Into immovable imagery
And profound hopes for a life
Interlaced with forever kisses,
Where time does not exist
Yet sensual orchards bloom
At the sight
Of your,
Remarkable,
Radiance
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Come to me, my love
That I might stand at the garden gate
Of love's most cherished abodes
Where thoughts are warming
And music creates itself
In anticipation of your arrival,
For my dreams of you
Are manifesting,
Through vestigial capabilities
And the crystalline idea
Of your ever,
Evolving,
Elegance...
Tony Taylor
* a compilation of stems ~
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Hi Tony, This is truly beautiful....Its so sentimental and flowing without being tacky as sometimes love poetry can be..... It's like being able to see the love you feel through your own eyes. I love the imagery here, you really have captured something very special
Lorna xxx
Thank you LORNA!!..... it's so interesting to receive a reply to a write likeĀ this fromĀ someone so ENTIRELYĀ capable of relating to it!!..... in love with a writer..... expressing that love through words..... and then wondering if it will be 'spot on' enough, because you love them, and their writing,Ā and their impressions of your own writingĀ ...oh my.... it's making me dizzy just trying to convey the overly complicated circumstances!!... smiles...... this IS fun isn't it!?...... wow!!.....thanx dear poet sister.... for being there & being aware!!.....YAY!!.....I'm laughing so hard now!!.....lol!!......hugs to you!!.....T xo ?āā“ā³ā„
WOW WOW WOW THAT IS GREAT POEM WOW I wis I could write like that maybe if I was in love I couldĀ WOW
YES!!!..... coolness!!.....thanx GREG!!..I think I know just what you mean!!.... not to worry.....Love comes for us all ....one way or another!!.....thanx for making me smile brother!!......Txo ?āā“ā³ā„
This is just beautiful...
Every image, every line resonates with heartfelt feeling.
Interestingly, the opening half of the first section has the flavour of Cherie's own writing...whether this was a stylistic choice or merely the influence of your thoughts of her as you wrote is immaterial...the whole thing puts a smile on the sourest reader's face nonetheless!!
Gorgeous...simply gorgeous!!!
J ;)
Thank You JASON!!.... for recognizing the effort on each line..., and I don't know if it has a little of her flavor in it but it definitely has my attempt at conveying how much I lover her.....a love that continues to evolve each day!!.:.....thanx again brother...... for the support and the gorgeous commentary!!....... love to you and yours!!.......T xo ?āā“ā³ā„
this poem is awesome linda
Yay!!..... glad you liked it LINDA!!......hugs-n-smiles!:......T xo ?āā“ā³ā„
hi Tony how are you I know I was loss for a while but I'm back :) so I was reading this and I love it "On an old wooden boardwalk,
Covered by love's canopy
And sandy castles
On the shores of this,
Our romance" love that part wow Hugh and kisses SilvyloveĀ
Holy Cow!! SILVY!!...where in the heck have you been hiding girlfriend?!..... hope all is well with you..... so happy to see you back on the pages!!.......thanx for reading..... I'll be in touch!!..... smiles...T xo ?āā“ā³ā„
Tony you are an amazing poet!
This piece is gorgeous!
Such love, desire and romance in this masterpiece!
A true treasure!
All Stars!
God bless you, Cactus Woman :)Ā
Wow! What's going on today?!.... keep hearing from people like yourself who've been absent from the pages for a while!:.....NOT that I'm complaining ...quite the opposite in fact!!..... what a great comment dear poet sister..... greatly appreciated!!......bug hugs-n-smiles to you and yours CW!!!!......T xo ?āā“ā³ā„
Breathtakingly beautiful Tony! This is so amazing! Congratulations on your nomination! :-)
Thanx GAYLE!!....always a pleasure my friend!!.....stay groovy!!.....T xo ?ā³ā“āā„
Wow this lil city's(cosmofunnel) population has a wide and vast array of truly gifted and talented individuals. All of you . Thank you for allowing me to be a art of it all .
Beautiful work Tony.
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Thanx So much STACY!!..indeed, it as you say, quite the family.....and a VERY positive environment for writers & painters to work on their craft.....with 'way cool' feedback from like minded and curiously odd characters...I LOVE IT here!!!.....I call it my work station!!.....thanx again dear poet sister.....see ya around the pages!!......T xo ?ā³ā“ā?
Absolutely beautiful. Pinned with love xxxxx
WOW!!....thanx for the PIN LUCY!!....I know we have a write to finish....I haven't forgotten.....b n touch soon!!.....smiles....T xo ?ā³ā“ā?
God bless you Tony, I'll be reading around.
Better late than never ? how on earth I missed this one //Ā
Tony,Ā this is a masterpiece of a poet / songwriter // the lyrics are word sounds / is this a love song?Ā the first line reminds me of one of my favorite love songs "Ā
i like this, not too sappy / a compendium of imagery and emotions ///
well done poetĀ
and again. Congrats on the nomination //
for me this is the winner for September contestĀ
hugsĀ
LeahĀ
and to Cherie,Ā you deserve this!!!Ā