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For how much longer
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For how much longer
Upon this earth
Shall be this breath
As I look up
Into the sky father
Holding his hand
Unto death
I cannot say
For how much longer
Upon this earth
Shall be this breath
As I look towards
The ocean mother
Into the waves from this land
Unto death; now until sunset
I cannot say
For how much longer
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My Dear Brother Poet Jai,
Looks like the "Cosmo coward" strikes again, giving you just one star, but being the pusillanimous pipsqueak that they are, never leave their name.
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Lord, how much longer do I have
Till you bring me to your side?
Will you open up your "Pearly Gates"
And let me then inside?
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Lord, how much longer do I have
Do my sins now get erased?
Have I prayed enough that your loving arms
Will now, this humble man embrace?
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Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry;
only a moron would be negativistic
Towards a poem that is about suicide
Only a jealous person would do so;
Jealousy is an instinct - a primitive one at that
In comparison your comments are always humbling and gentleman like and
stylishly poetic.
The low rater Aka the low
this poem was about a friend's recent suicide attempt and my Anxiety for him still
Thank you Larry
kind rgs Jai:)
My Dear Friend Jai,
Your analysis of the "Coward of Cosmo" is perfect. I have tried to insult them several times, even writing a derogatory poem called "The Coward of Cosmo". But the slimeball still refused to show their face. Also, I wish you all the best with your tormented friend, and hope that he will heal. Thank you so much for your kind words. I know that you and I share a special bond.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry;
kind rgs Jai:)