There is a lot said in a few words. The image is strong and painful you did a good piece of writing as you conveyed a message and made the reader care
susanna
This is a powerful short. There is a true feeling of having lost your mum, despite her physical self still being present. Addiction changes a person and you conveyed that feeling of being with a stranger perfectly. A heart breaking last stanza which gives the reader a lump in their throat for you
You wielded a great poem here which others will empathise with
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Wonderful poem I love your name Stella watching the movie streetcar named desire today with Marlon Brando saying Stella Stella Great line
There is a lot said in a few words. The image is strong and painful you did a good piece of writing as you conveyed a message and made the reader care
susanna
Hello Stella
This is a powerful short. There is a true feeling of having lost your mum, despite her physical self still being present. Addiction changes a person and you conveyed that feeling of being with a stranger perfectly. A heart breaking last stanza which gives the reader a lump in their throat for you
You wielded a great poem here which others will empathise with
welcome to Cosmo
Gwen x