Poem -
Force
Evil was taught a lesson it has never known before.
Evil knowsย it hasย lost the initiative in aย mighty war.
Its soldiers lay, as aย testament to its incompetence.
Good souls cheer, as no longer itย displays arrogance.
It never envisaged such a humiliation to lift so many.
Now,ย righteous are encouraged to confront tyranny.
Where the future was looking so barren and bleak,
In victory millions have a chance findingย allย they seek !
Never again will evil dominate the meek or hold sway,
Never again will any suffer, as before this glorious day !
A voice has now shouted a message evil canย not ignore,
Its fate has been secured, a force shaking it to the core !
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Hey Sir Waters!!.... this is VERY interesting piece......I know that the quote in the pic by Harold Kushner is representative of the intent in your write...... didn't he write the book "When Bad Things Happen To Good People"?....... anyway, I love the never-ending promotion you dedicate so many of your writes to...... Good triumphing over evil...... and in this piece "Evil's" fate has been secured.....AH!!ย Victory at last!!...... cool stuff brother poet!!...... good to see you here my friend...... hope all is well with you......LOVE and ROCKETS !!....T xo
Yes, Harold S. Kushner did write that book ! I have watched an interesting lecture by the author on his theories on You Tube ! Fascinating stuff indeed !
Thank you for your kind words on my work. Hoping you and yours are keeping well !
Take care my friend. Hug ! ย :)
Hi Richard....in the long run Good will always triumph over evil no matter what. Nice write...perfect rhymes.... Enjoyed it
Lots of love...Rose
Love the positive message you are sending me here ! Evil triumphs only if good does nothing to stop it !ย
Wishing you all the best as always ! Love and hugs !
:)
Hello Richard...
Your writes hold much hope and positivity...
Through all the darkness evil breathes...
There is light in the world as long as we keep it lit...
Together...
Great write!ย
Thank you for sharing...
Missed you!
Love and hugs.ย :)
sparrowsongย
Thank you for being there !
Love and hugs to you as always !
:)
grand piece Richard!
So pleased you enjoyed it ! Wishing you all the best !
Take care. ย :)
Hug. :)
:)
I love this message Richard, all it takes is for most of us to have the courage to show goodness to life itself, evil will always be intimidated by good, it's just up to us to show the way. Enjoyed this write very much, Richard, thank you for sharing :-)
Thank you for your insightful comments !
Wishing you all the best as always !
Take care my friend. ย :)