Poem - 08 September 2016, 06:56 Forever Larry Ran The heart is crying The soul shivers in sadness The loss, forever Lo Ran Zen Like 1 Pin it 2 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 870 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Love Loss Sad Poetry Genre: Haiku Topic: Misery Listed in: Contest Entries 6 comments
Sana.A08 September 2016, 07:17 Hi Larry,Ā Loved reading your work. Ā You can honestly feel the emotion. Thank you so much for sharing FromĀ Sana :) Reply
Larry Ran08 September 2016, 07:29 Hi Sana, So glad you felt my words.Ā When I write a Haiku, I try to take its readers to the stars. Peace and Love, xox Larry Reply
Georgina Richardson08 September 2016, 07:30 My Larry that is beautiful and says so much for the soul and heart. I agree with Sana that you can certainly feel the emotion in it. Well done sweetie, you are so good at those Haiku`s, I love it. I love you both deeply G xx Reply
Larry Ran08 September 2016, 07:37 Hi Dear G, I find Haikus such a challenge to take just 17 syllables, and portray erupting emotions.Ā I generally write these when I am at the height of mine. We all love you, L, L & C Reply
Rose Sho08 September 2016, 08:53 Hi Larry, indeed Haiku's such a challenge. I've tried several times and failed. I'd keep reading yours so'd I'd learn from you. Capturing such emotions in just three lines is highly commendable. Weldone Larry. Lots of love.....Rose Reply
Larry Ran08 September 2016, 09:26 Hi Sweet Rose, Even though you takeĀ more than three lines, to capture heartfelt emotions, it is always a joy and an education for me to read lovely words too.Ā Thank you for this loving comment. Hugs, Peace and Love, xox Larry Reply
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Hi Larry,Ā
Loved reading your work. Ā You can honestly feel the emotion. Thank you so much for sharing
FromĀ
Sana :)
Hi Sana,
So glad you felt my words.Ā When I write a Haiku, I try to take its readers to the stars.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
My Larry that is beautiful and says so much for the soul and heart. I agree with Sana that you can certainly feel the emotion in it.
Well done sweetie, you are so good at those Haiku`s, I love it.
I love you both deeply
G xx
Hi Dear G,
I find Haikus such a challenge to take just 17 syllables, and portray erupting emotions.Ā I generally write these when I am at the height of mine.
We all love you,
L, L & C
Hi Larry, indeed Haiku's such a challenge. I've tried several times and failed. I'd keep reading yours so'd I'd learn from you.
Capturing such emotions in just three lines is highly commendable. Weldone Larry.
Lots of love.....Rose
Hi Sweet Rose,
Even though you takeĀ more than three lines, to capture heartfelt emotions, it is always a joy and an education for me to read lovely words too.Ā Thank you for this loving comment.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry